The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/15
Congratulations on expressing such depth in such simple terms that can help readers of any age to grow in their understanding and appreciation of God's love and power.
06/07/15
What a beautiful free style poem about our God and His love for us. Well done.
06/08/15
I like the rhythmic flow as your poem subtly imparts its message. The attempt o rhyme distress, brass, and goodness grates on me and sits badly enough to hurt. Other than that, I really like it.
06/08/15
Wow! I loved it! I thought it had a pleasantly original arrangement, and was profound in its attempt to explore all God controls:) Fantastic!
06/09/15
So beautiful and moving. Love this.
Such wonderful praise you present--all inspired by God's Word.