The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/15
I like this. Good job. Thank you.
06/01/15


What a lovely poem.

Your love for the Lord is palpable coming from your heart...your sweet love letter to God resonates truths and along with a powerful witness.

I love this:
He speaks, I listen, without fear,
There is not a tinge of distrust,
His words of wisdom I can hear,
And follow my Lord, I must.


Excellent and on topic!

God bless~
06/02/15
Your poem reveals complete trust in the Lord. Like many of us we wonder why we did not reach that stage before, but now we are just happy to be there.
This is so lovely. You definitely have an artistic way of expressing your relationship with Jesus. It's so real and encouraging. Congratulations on ranking 19th overall! Happy Dance!