The Official Writing Challenge
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A lot of message packed in here! I liked your take on the topic. Good job!
This is a powerful piece. I'm not musical, but I could hear this as if it were put to music. The only red ink might be to not use so many exclamation marks. You nailed the topic and this piece really goes along with the Bible study topic at my church. I believe God is speaking to me through your wonderful words.
Congratulations on ranking 20th overall! Happy Dance!