The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/15
Really "sweet" and enjoyable read.

God bless~
05/12/15
Cute and fun - LOVE the voice (and the "Fictional" thing definitely gave me a giggle). YES
This was a funny, heartwarming story. When I noticed in your introductory paragraph, fun-sized candy bar, I shuddered to think of the children's attention span afterwards. I was thinking, "done that" and it didn't work to well. Maybe your story would turn out differently.