The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/15
Powerful and lovely to read.
God bless~
What a brilliant take on Adam and Eve. You had me hooked from the first line. Even though each word seems innocent enough, I could sense the dangerous and evil atmosphere. That can't be easy to do with only a few words, but you nailed it. I found my heart beating a bit faster and wanted to scream to the fly, No! It takes a lot for me to pity a fly too. :)
Congratulations on ranking 16th overall! Happy Dance!