The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/15
I enjoyed this story, great ending.

God bless~
This is a great story. You did a splendid job of picking the perfect words to propel the reader onward. Your ending made me giggle.
This was a well-written story. It has a nice flow to it. I liked the twist at the end. Love wins out.
05/07/15
You've packed a lot into this piece, and still left room for a fun twist to wrap it up. Well done.