The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/15
Sweet story with a good message.

God bless~
There is so many different emotions in this piece. You did a great job with the twist. I usually see them coming, but didn't realize Mom was still alive until the end. Nicely done.
05/07/15
Congrats Leola!
God bless~