The Official Writing Challenge
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Such insight,
Wow!
04/17/15
Powerfully done, but most especially in closing.

God bless~
04/20/15
Wow. Compelling with a powerful ending.

I spotted a word or two missing, but it didn't take away from this amazing write.

The ending was perfect.
04/20/15
What a powerful allegory. I find more layers each time I go back and read it again. How true it is.

Your descriptions came across very strongly to me, with good words. Maybe in a few places there were some passive "were" and "was" sentences, but I thought there were a lot of action and salsa words. Opposing, clashed, disarray, whizzed, myriad, trinkets . . . and I keep finding more. :P I thought the writing was lively and engaging and the message was very profound.
04/20/15
I can't even begin to express to you how this ministered to me on so many levels. Powerful allegory, powerful words. Well done, friend.
04/20/15
I loved this. Very creative and informative. So many don't realize that they need to fight. They think Jesus does it all.
Great job. Blessings, LaVonne
04/21/15
What powerful imagery. I felt as if I were on the battle field as well. It's so very true, we have to stand up, wearing the full armor of God and fight daily. Thank you for the reminder.
I loved this. Though the battle belongs to the Lord, we still have our part in it.
A wonderful allegory.