The Official Writing Challenge
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You certainly covered the topic and most especially in conclusion.

God bless~
WOW. I didn't get it until the very end. Extremely powerful, effective, and, of course, right on topic. Chilling and real.
Wow, you did a great job of portraying the blackness of heart of the one thief. His dialogue was close to disturbing, which painted a good contrast between the two, and then the third, the King of glory. I was over half way through before I realized it was a fresh take on the wonderful old, old story. Good work!
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall! Happy Dance!