The Official Writing Challenge
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I was drawn in immediately to this fun and zany situation that played out until the MC found rest for her weary soul. Enjoyable entry.
We moved into a house once infested with bats - so I know where you are coming from!! Very funny story - you have the gift of humorous writing for sure - well done.
I'm not entirely sure it fits the intent of the challenge, but it was great - captivating the reader from the very start and holding our interest throughout. Very well done.
We all took this challange waaaaaaay too seriously. What a refreshing story in the midst of all our doom and gloom. Great story. My husband wants to know why I'm chuckling. "Bat guts," is my response.
A great light-hearted take on the topic. I enjoyed your story.
You wrote a really funny story that allowed me to be right on the bat-fan site. Original take on the topic, with personal drama shimmering through the light-hearted words. I liked the informal tone, although the use of parentheses distracted a little bit, but that may be a matter of taste.
This was definitely funny! I struggled a bit with the parentheses, but the descriptions were so vivid that I could imagine the scene and the ensuing chaos.
You have a gift for humor. Thanks for sharing this fun read. Good luck in the Challenge.

A gem of story!

God bless~
God bless~
I love this. Delightful humor. Congratulations and God bless.
EEEK!! I'm not surprised this placed - your word choices and writing are excellent, and I giggled, gagged, and then cheered at the end. You hit the topic well - at the end it is very clear the all is well with your MC's
Congratulations, Corinne, on your EC placement. Well deserved for this story.
This story is hilarious and a must read after a tough day. Laughter is the best medicine. Congratulations on your well-deserved Editor's choice win.