The Official Writing Challenge
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This a moving poem about love. The are so many layers to the piece. Thank you for touching our hearts with your words.
Powerful and moving your lovely poem!

God bless~
This heartfelt prayer is from the heart and touches the reader's heart. The descriptive early verses of comparison with nature build up to the longing to know His love so much more deeply and then to return it. Such challenging lessons, all so beautifully expressed and in lovely verse - Thankyou.
I love this!
I could feel that came from the heart, and I was moved by the raw emotion in your poem. Beautiful!
Love is the greatest gift we can offer. Wonderful poem. Blessings, LaVonne
Each stanza, each example in this classic poem is stellar (I loved the spider, cheetah, and especially the rose stanzas.) Then, the message from your final stanzas breathe "love." Beautiful work on this heart-felt prayer! <3
Oh I love this. It will be in my favorites!
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall! Happy Dance!