The Official Writing Challenge
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Your vivid descriptions brought this familiar story to life. A nice choice for the topic.
03/14/15
Well done in content and delivery, and the message rings true.

Nicely done.

God bless~
03/15/15
Enjoyable read, and I liked the way you didn't tell who the prisoners were until the end.
03/21/15
Good job! My favorite line is, "you should write that in a book sometime."