The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/15
Poetically beautiful with clarity of meaning.

God bless~
03/16/15
A beautiful picture of our future as Christians. Love how easily your lines flowed especially: Earth's hourglass of slipping sand will one day stop at his command.
03/17/15
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I like, especially the internal rhyming scheme you employed. The beauty of the poetic scenes give promise to our future.