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This is a touching story that brought a lump to my throat despite my certainty that the ending would be happy. Leaving an orphanage is an apt image of salvation, as we are adopted as God's sons and daughters.
03/14/15
Delightful story with a happy ending.
Thank you for sharing.
03/14/15
Hallelujah! A happy ending! I may be among the "scant few" that love sparkly and happy delightful endings.

This was fabulous and I could read it over and over again. It is my kind of story. I loved it. I pray it does well, because it not only opens the heart of the reader, but brings home the topic in a grand way.

Well done!

God bless~