The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/15
This will definitely be in the winner's circle. Powerfully executed in content and delivery!

I loved it.

God bless~
Moving poem. I love the metaphor of a broken vase and that it is a dialogue between the "I" and God. Interesting choice of rhyme pattern (abba).
I like the style of question and answer you chose for this your first and very good poem!
Really beautiful, I loved the image of the vase. Faith is beautiful yet fragile, but God's loving and merciful handling comes through so clearly. Awesome job!
You grabbed my heart, squeezed it and wouldn[t release me to the last word. And I am breathless - you truly have God's gift for writing prose and poetry. I will keep my eyes open for you!
03/12/15
Once again, Congrats Milly, and I called it...knew you'd be in the winner's circle.

God bless~
Lovely, Milly. Congratulations!
03/12/15
This is a beautiful poem. I had to reread it to appreciate the challenging rhyme scheme. Your ending lines are perfect with a great message. Congratulations!
03/13/15
Congratulations, Milly, on your EC for this lovely poem.
Congratulations on this beautiful poem. I'm so glad it was a winner. Well deserved.