The Official Writing Challenge
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You really made these two 3-dimensional, and I enjoyed the fresh perspective. I expect this to do well.
I thought I'd see many stories about Abraham this week, but yours is a stand out. Well done and captivating detail.

God bless~
Creative viewpoint here. I especially liked the description of Abraham.
Great job Dave!

Congrats and God Bless~
Delighted to see this at number 1! Not surprised at all. Congratulations, Dave.
Wow mate! Back into it with a vengeance.

Congratulations and a big pat n the back from your Aussie buddy.

Blessings, Graham.
Congratulations, Dave, on your win. It's well deserved. Telling this story from Isaac's point of view, with his emotions and insights, and including the place of his faith in this has worked really well.
A beautiful twist on a familiar story. Congratulations, Dave. Well done. God bless.
The truth and reality of this account has left me with a lump in my throat as I have read it! You have made Abraham and Isaac vividly 'live' before our eyes. You have been able to transport the reader back almost 'into their presence' by your amazing descriptions. It thrilled my heart - thankyou so much and many many congratulations.
Congratulations on a very well deserved 1st Place. You made the story come alive. It touched my heart in a new way.
Great job in making this come alive with details. I thoroughly enjoyed the read!