The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/15
Awwww! I loved this story, I could see it as a children's book with fabulous illustrations to go along with your wonderful lesson!

Creative, fun and totally out of the box! Loved it.

God bless~
I totally agree! The entire time I was reading it, whimsical pictures kept dancing through my head! It has a wonderful story line and message. Well written!
03/05/15
A totally delightful read! Masterfully-written. Your characters came alive from the first line and the development of the story kept me glued to the pond and surrounding wildlife. Please find an illustrator and make this lovely book happen for kids in today's world. Brilliant job.
03/06/15
A vivid, beautiful story, enabling kids to have the discussion with their parents about bullying, and the way to handle it.
This story is truly enchanting.
I loved this! This definitely hit the topic. I think the message is just as relevant to adults, as well as children. I hope this piece does well!
03/09/15
A very ribbiting read
Oh what a delight! I too was ribbeted to the very last - don't let there be a last word. Keep on writing - I want more stories from you! And yes, I am a child . . .