The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a creepy, behind the scenes look into the spiritual world. Well done!
Yes, pride takes on many different forms. The setting and characters of this one gave me eerie chills. Well done.
Wow - this was "different" Great descriptive writing.

God bless~
You've done a great job identifying the numerous (and sometimes unexpected) forms pride can take. You've shown why no Christian can afford to be complacent about the issue. Fantastic writing and I hope this does well.
Deeply (all the way to the devil's lair)engrossing - love it!
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall! Happy Dance!