The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/15
This is a creepy, behind the scenes look into the spiritual world. Well done!
03/02/15
Yes, pride takes on many different forms. The setting and characters of this one gave me eerie chills. Well done.
03/02/15
Wow - this was "different" Great descriptive writing.

God bless~
You've done a great job identifying the numerous (and sometimes unexpected) forms pride can take. You've shown why no Christian can afford to be complacent about the issue. Fantastic writing and I hope this does well.
Deeply (all the way to the devil's lair)engrossing - love it!
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall! Happy Dance!