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This story has a powerful message. It is sad that pride and greed can cloud our minds resulting in dire consequences. Sometimes its too late to turn back as this story eloquently demonstrates.
This was a powerfully written piece. It shows that eternity lived anywhere other than heaven isn't worth doing your own way.
A terrific piece. If only we can learn from the mistakes of others, but we tend to want to do it our way, without God. We can do nothing without Him. Thanks for sharing.
I echo everyone's sentiments and will add, Well done and powerful close.

God bless~
Powerful, original and thought provoking. Great piece!