The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/15
Good story, right on topic. The end made me cringe and left me wanting to know what happened next...
Great cliffhanger! I could see this being a two-part story (at least). Right on topic and a very fun read with some beautiful descriptive writing. Great piece!
Wow! What a web your MC wove - all her fear of embarrassment came back on her own head. Fitting. Shame on her - and it truly became her shame.
03/02/15
Well done!

God bless~
03/04/15
I want to read what happens next too! Will she learn from her shame? How will she get herself out of that mess? Good job drawing the reader into the story.
Congratulations on ranking 19th overall! Happy Dance!
03/06/15
oh wow! what a captivating story with a perfect ending. :) You've created this perfectly. I enjoyed reading it.