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02/26/15
I like how you've set these two arrow-minded folks who've groan too complacent for theor own good. (I also enjoyed the arrow-gant pun.) Too may people forget that the gospel is all about change, and these folks somehow think that advising God is a spiritual gift!
A sad but accurate commentary on the kind of church that has lost its first love.
Well done.
02/27/15
St Groanings'! Very entertaining piece that nails the topic. I can almost hear the posh English spoken by this poor, misled couple. Once I started reading, although it made me cringe, I wanted to know what other horrible things they would say. It may be a caricature, but the fact that some churches' reality will come close, makes me sad.

Well done.
02/28/15
Great caricature images that you've conjured up in my mind. The dialect and and picture that you've created is just splendid. The truth behind all of it is a sad commentary on some church folk. Well done.
02/28/15
I really love this and do hope it rates as a winner. What a great name, 'St Groanings'! I liked the part where the "hooligans" changed Arrow-Gant to Arro-gant. Very funny, but with a sobering message as we see (or I do) a tinge of ourselves in this couple. A bit reminiscent of Adrian Plass' writing. Well done!
I like it, especially the last name of the couple.

The pride of a church who forgets that it belongs to Jesus, not the people in it.

Great job. Would be fun to watch it played out.
02/28/15
This is brilliant from the title to the finish. Excellent work! I loved it.
03/01/15
Well done Kat. As always your playing around with words is very admirable and I appreciate it much. It was a great read and very original.
You usually come up with very creative entries.
Blessings
A hearty dish of tosh and twaddle! And a heartbreaking tale of those with Pharisee mindsets. Excellent piece . . .
03/02/15
I echo everyone's sentiments. What can I say except, "I'll see you in the winner's circle" again.

Well done.

God bless~
03/03/15
A brilliant skit from someone who definitely understands the difference between Religion and Relationship.
Well done.
03/05/15
See? I told you didn't I?

Congrats!

God bless~
03/05/15
Congratulations!

Wing His Words
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
A marvelous cautionary tale to remind us of what our churches must never become. Congratulations!