The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/15
Wow powerful, moving with an excellent and poignant message. This made me tear up a little. Excellent work!

GOd bless~
I really enjoyed this. The first part was dripping with jealously. I also thought you did a great job with the letter. You really did a nice job developing the characters. The ending was great. It's amazing how seeing how bad others have it can really change our own perspective.
02/26/15
Really great message. Very moving. Well presented.
Congratulations on ranking 19 overall! Happy Dance!