The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/15
This was a compelling and powerful read...well done and excellent writing.

I'm sure the judges will take notice.

Well done,

God bless~
You did a great job of developing these characters. I could totally relate to both characters. I think your ending was great too.
02/20/15
This is a terrific YA entry that all of us can relate to on some level. You did a super job at developing the characters and pulling us into the story. I loved the ending.
A very believable piece and I could feel your MC's dilemma. I'm glad the story ended with a positive choice. Great, well-written and uplifting piece.
02/24/15
We all have felt this way, only to find out that the one we envy has problems much worse than our own.

My nemesis was a cheer leader who became Miss Georgia, dated Elvis, was dumped by him and now as a married woman plasters his picture all over facebook with her by his side. Pretty pathetic when you think about it.

This is wonderfully written and I would say, yes, a winner. If it's not, it should be. My favorite one, this time.

Blessings...