The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/15
Powerful sentiments flow through your poem with a pertinent and all too important message at close.
Well done.

God bless~
02/20/15
Powerful sentiments flow through your poem with a pertinent with an all too important message at close that resonated truth.

Well done.

God bless~










"This was the message I wanted to leave. Pls disregard first message. Sorry."
This is really good. I think you nailed so many people's true feelings. You really delivered a great message.
02/20/15
Great picture if the delusion that is too-often fed by envy - without labouring the point.
Excellent poem with an excellent message
I can so identify with the pain expressed in these few words. If it is true, my heart is hugging yours tightly, and if not true - you expressed the topic exquisitely . . .
Wow. I almost wrote mine about envying my much younger self, but you nailed the emotions perfectly - the before and after of coming to the Christ . . .
Oops! My second comment was meant for someone else. This topic makes me tremble . . .
Fantastic poem, and oh, so very true. I loved the message that came through so clearly.
02/22/15
A wonderful message surfaces through a sad poem. Great job.