The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/15
I love your whole concept behind the "Sin Knot" and the creative way this is written. You have something for everyone in this endearing, didactic story. <3
02/15/15
A most enjoyable read! I like the way your story tells Jimmy's thoughts in such an authentic way, as a little boy might well muse whilst sitting through a sermon. A great take on the topic.
I could just imagine a child coming out with this! Awesome piece!
02/16/15
Little boys and sermons don't often gel well. At least he picked up a worthy message in his round about way. A cute story. Loved it.