The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/15
Very movingly written and I'm glad you ended it the way you did, not with a contrived 'happy-ever-after' ending. Great writing.
02/15/15
A well written and on topic story, ending with a glimmer of hope. I like the kind of endings that leave space to imagine what happened next.
02/16/15
I'm glad she left him. So many women don't. And I'm glad she never stopped praying for him. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we all did that? Good story, great writing!
02/19/15
An excellent story. Thanks for the pleasure of a great read.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall! Happy Dance!
02/19/15
Very well written. I have to feel compassion even for the man, he doesn't have a clue except that which he sees in his wife. May her prayers be answered. Congratulations on 2nd.