The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/15
A very well written poem about the direst of subjects. Right on the topic too. Well done.
02/15/15
Great job Kat! Your imagery is powerful! I've never thought of my anger as a wasp, but I have been known to sting when I'm in a fit:0 Spot on.

Bravo on tackling poetry. I'm not a poet and have passed on entering my attempts at it for just that reason. Encouraging to see someone run straight at it!

02/16/15
A superb poem with vivid and powerful imagery. You could have been writing about me on a mealy mouthed day!
02/16/15
Wonderful job! Though swords tear flesh, words sever souls...Harsh words that bruise him to the core. And stay with him forevermore... I hate myself for what I said.
Thank you so much!
02/17/15
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem cast in regular iambic lines,impacting my reading senses about rage. Thank you for the reminder.
Superb poetry. I really liked it. I was feeling sorry for "him" till the last line! ;)
02/19/15
Congratulations!

Wing His Words
02/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
I knew it was great! Congratulations!
02/19/15
Congratulations Kat. I'm not surprised to see you here again. Great poem!
02/19/15
Congratulations Kat. Great work for its powerful imagery.
You're brilliant in so many ways. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!