The Official Writing Challenge
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This is quite a story! I think this is just a snapshot - I could imagine it in a book as a short(ish) story. It's an interesting take on the topic, for sure.
02/18/15
This was a great read! And I loved the originality of the mountains being named after the Fruit of the Spirit. I felt the ending was a little abrupt. I assume the guy climbing the mountain was caught in the lava flow. Blessings,