The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/15
This gave me the creeps. The idea of being watched like that. I know there's a continuous battle going on. that we can't see. Good job of bringing it to light!
02/18/15
Yes! This was great! I knew very quickly you were coming from the demonic aspect, and it enabled you to give scriptural truths without being trite. I'm very aware of the warfare on this angle. I have struggled with anger considerably, and God showed me I needed to remove all the idols from my home that I'd purchased whilst travelling. I felt release as soon as I threw them away, and the constant rage has completely gone - so THAT'S why I KNOW this story is very real.
02/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
02/19/15
Very descriptive and powerfully written. Congrats on your EC.
02/23/15
I love how the identity of MC crept up on me until I gradually recognized him as the demon Rage. His voice, his taunts, and his lies - all too familiar. The second to last paragraph is my favorite. I was like a statue, frozen and breathless, Brilliant ending. Amazing job.