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A very powerful warning showing how children learn about priorities and the potential consequences that sloth can have. Very creative angle and written well. Great and very memorable piece.
02/05/15
This reminds me of that old song “Cats In The Cradle” by Harry Chapin. Parents are such important role models for their children, good or bad, as your story illustrates so well. Great job!
02/12/15
JK,

Didn't have a chance to read entries last week. But, so glad I got a chance to read this now. Excellent job, I appreciated it from beginning to ending.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall! Happy Dance!