The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww! Touchingly beautiful. I loved this. I have such a soft spot for the elderly in nursing homes, having spent my entire career working with this special population.

God bless~
You created interest and mystique immediately. I didn't know where it was going to take me. Well done!
This is sweet and sad and I'm glad I took the time to read it. You paced the story just right and knew how to grab my interest from the start. Loved the compassion shown by the MC in this tender story.
Oh, this was both lovely and sad, brought tears to my eyes. Well done! Great read!
Excellent piece! Enjoyed it very much, but so sad.
this is my favorite this week hands down!the answer to the mystery is so emotionally tangible;..)

you did a great job with this piece
Great job telling this story Jody. I have worked in many nursing homes with Alzheimer's patients who have similar stories.
I loved this story. Great job, and congrats!
Your story is beautiful and completely warmed my heart. Excellent writing. Congrats on your EC!