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01/25/15
Interesting and enjoyable piece. I really liked the whole dialogue, it had an authentic tone.

WEll done,

God bless~
01/26/15
You have cleverly cloaked your ideas and your research in natural dialogue, which enhances their credibility. Well done.
01/29/15
Your mix of seriousness and lightheartedness between the husband and wife gives this a genuine feel. Well Done.