The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/15
A beautiful poem from the heart. The desire for God and your love for Him is palpable in this inspirational entry.

I loved it.

God bless~
01/16/15
"Life longs for itself, indeed"... you describe the longings of every human so well in this universal poem. A really beautiful read.
A very well written poem. It makes you stop and think about your priorities and how they effect your relationship with the Lord.

I know a lot of thought and faith went into writing this poem. You should do well in your group. All master level writers are some of the best in the country. You are among the best of the best my friend!

God Bless!
This is beautiful and speaks volumes. You really captured the heart of the topic in so many ways. The flow and rhyme seemed to be effortless. You really nailed the topic, and did so with a profound message. Congratulations on ranking 23 overall! Happy Dance!