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This was so hard to read, gut wrenchingly so. I must confess I thought it was a bit over the top...and then I noticed that the story was in fact, no story at all but a reality. I feEl so sorry for those affected by this tragedy.
Wow, what a tragic, true story, but a powerful reminder of how far down that first unrestrained step into lust can take someone. Well written.
A somber and heartbreaking read that was on topic 100% and then some.

I thought the writing and the style in which it was delivered, excellent.

God bless~
You have skilfully mixed detail with restraint in a tragic story that hurts all the more for its factual base. Great work.
Fascinating, absorbing, well written.