The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/14
I love this line: 'One day Aunt Emily bustled round to our house, and in her characteristic huffy puffy, so very much to do mode, pulled a parcel wrapped in brown paper from her shopping bag.' - that is a great slice of create writing! I enjoyed reading your interesting story.
11/30/14
oops..I meant to say creative writing...
12/02/14
Loved the MC's voice. I was a little confused about the guy with a map. But, other than that, a very well written story that I felt drawn into right away.
12/03/14
I loved the voice of your MC and the way you drew each life-changing "vignette," from the grandmother's death, to the photo, to the family secret. So much sorrow. Well done.
12/03/14
Awww...moving and hauntingly beautiful piece. Well done, and well written.

Excellent and a winner in my eyes.

GOd bless~
The last line was so touching and showed how your MC had gained empathy and understanding. That was a great take on the topic.
I thought that was very striking. A series of evocative glimpses into a life. Very touching and one that will be difficult to forget!