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I could feel the pulse of this wonderfully written story.The relationship between the siblings is tender and the war with his father is acidic. Many will relate to this.
Wow this story screams for more - I wonder if it is part of an ensuing novel? Thanks for your entry in this weeks Challenge. Keep writing!
Well done! I really enjoyed this piece.

GOd bless~
A fantastic piece. I was there in the scene,absorbed by the action and dynamic characters.

God BLess~
This is a wonderful short store--so worthy of first place EC. I love it!
Wow, Rachel! I can see why you received First Place Editor's Choice.

It's a powerfully emotional piece, drawing the reader in.

But I hate being left wondering if Ritchey's dad had given his heart to God and Ritchey just didn't realize it yet. As was suggested, I too hope this becomes part of a novel.
Yippee! I'm so excited you came 1st place. A well-deserved recognition for a great story. Congratulations!
Congratulations on a well deserved first place.
Well done Rachel! I loved this piece so much. The scene at the table is so powerful and explosive. So many young people go into life with such deep scars. Some visible. Some not.
I'm fairly new to faithwriters, and this story made me feel at home in this community. Wow! I could feel the tension! Thanks for sharing!!!