The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/14
Wow - riveting and powerfully written.

Good close!


God bless~
11/22/14
Absorbing work that is so painfully and awfully credible.
Great descriptive material.
11/22/14
Your story drew me in right from the beginning. The end left me wanting more, which is a good thing.

It describes a situation that unfortunately goes on unseen in many countries. Thanks for sharing.
Very powerful piece. I want to know what happens next!
11/24/14
Wow...I never expected those twists - the first or the final!

I liked it. It was suspenseful and a very good story, and yet it could have been real, as awful as it is to think about.
11/26/14
What a powerful piece of prose! It was serious, thought-provoking, engaging, evoked fear and dread, and provided some beautifully-written images that enhanced the reader's imagination.

Please, make this a longer story. You definitely have left people wanting more.
11/28/14
Wow....great story Helen and very well written....but what happens next!
11/28/14
Congrats!
God bless~