The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/14
Excellent writing! This story was presented like a chapter from a book...loved it.

God bless~
11/23/14
Loved the descriptive imagery that flows through this whole piece. And I also look forward to your next chapter.
Great story!

Made me think of a very young employee of my dad's. He told him once that he was the worst person to work for because when he messed up, my dad didn't get angry, he just laughed. :)

This painted a really fun picture:
'It was a sorry boy who rode into the yard a few hours later, filthy, bug-chewed, and wearing a charred slicker and a pair of jeans that werent much more than scorched holes held together with a few rivets.'
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall! Happy Dance!