The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/14
Intense read that tugged at my heart. Well written.

God bless~
11/08/14
Very clear depiction of the trauma that too many kids have to endure from insecure parents. Great job.
11/10/14
What a heart-breaking story and you have told it very well. You left me wanting something good to happen, for the MC to be encouraged and affirmed. Great writing.
11/15/14
Sometimes writing makes a person's heart hurt and it creates a desire to see it end well. But, other times it leaves off at the pain and spurs the reader to, hopefully, recognize this pain in others and offer a balm to the pained spirits. Very well done!
11/15/14
Sometimes writing makes a person's heart hurt and it creates a desire to see it end well. But, other times it leaves off at the pain and spurs the reader to, hopefully, recognize this pain in others and offer a balm to the pained spirits. Very well done!