The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/14
This is a beautiful, poignant story full of emotion, and leaves me questioning my own heart. I don't know if my reaction would be as sacrificial as your MCs, but I pray my actions would always reflect the Father's heart for his children. A well writting story that certainly fits the topic for the week. Well done.
11/07/14
Very description of a clear, compassionate contrast to the panic reaction of the crowd. Well done.
11/08/14
Contemporary and so "right now." Well done.

God bless~
11/10/14
This is a great story. Thanks for sharing your creative spirit through words. I hope you do well with this entry.
11/13/14
Congratulations on this win and your consistent display of writing talent. The subject and the use of "contemporary" communication" ("Texting") kept this solidly on topic.

Well done! :-)
11/13/14
Tracy,
Congats!
God bless~

Congratulations Tracey. Another well deserved win.