The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/14
This story packed a powerful emotional punch.

God bless
09/11/14
Heartbreaking and wrenching. I was enraptured.
09/13/14
Very absorbing read, building up to a strong climax. Well done.
What a heart-breaking story and so well told.
This is an intense and beautiful read. Thank you for the beauty, sad as it is.
Oh, what a powerfully emotive story! One I shall long remember. The judges should love this . . .
Truly emotional writing. I think this one is a winner.
09/18/14
Congratuluations!
God bless~
09/18/14
WONDERFUL! Good job, Ann, and congratulations. God bless.
An amazing story of such profound sadness. Incredible writing. Many congrats on your well deserved win.
09/18/14
O dear, if the rest of the winning entries lean in this direction, I'm going to be a blubbering mess.
I was completely absorbed in your tale.
Amazing storytelling! Congratulations.
09/18/14
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
09/20/14
superb. you bring life through death. a worthy champion.
09/24/14
This is masterful writing, Ann. Your story gripped me from start to finish - so moving and well told. Thanks for writing this and congratulations on your well deserved win.
09/30/14
Your story is masterfully crafted and compelling. Your character development is excellent. While based on past events, perhaps it is a bit prophetic as well. This is amazing, Ann. Congrats on your EC.