The Official Writing Challenge
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What a delightful read you've crafted! I loved the dialogue and descriptions, both of which had me hooked from the first line. Of course, I wanted more, but I always do when it's a fun read of so few words. Lovely job capturing the historic period, as well as the development of the characters.
Clever, interesting and unique approach to the topic.

Well done.

God bless~
You've set the scene for an historical drama here, with a fine touch in drawing your characters. I'd like to read more..

Well done
This is very enjoyable historical fiction.
Love your characters and the dialogue. A unique and interesting use of the topic.
Hehehe Oh, this is great. And I can imagine that morning sickness and sea sickness would resemble each other. I liked the ending.
Congratulations on ranking 16th overall! Happy Dance!