The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/14
What a delightful read you've crafted! I loved the dialogue and descriptions, both of which had me hooked from the first line. Of course, I wanted more, but I always do when it's a fun read of so few words. Lovely job capturing the historic period, as well as the development of the characters.
09/05/14
Clever, interesting and unique approach to the topic.

Well done.

God bless~
09/06/14
You've set the scene for an historical drama here, with a fine touch in drawing your characters. I'd like to read more..

Well done
This is very enjoyable historical fiction.
09/07/14
Love your characters and the dialogue. A unique and interesting use of the topic.
09/07/14
Hehehe Oh, this is great. And I can imagine that morning sickness and sea sickness would resemble each other. I liked the ending.
Congratulations on ranking 16th overall! Happy Dance!