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09/05/14
Awwww! So touching and beautiful, at the end I had a very sad, yet joyful smile.

Lovely work.

God bless~
Thoroughly enjoyable read with a surprise ending. Well done.
09/07/14
Oh, this is good. A very nice little tribute. It was so well told, I thought it might be true.
Great story.

I'll admit the ending was a little shocking...

Having once hunted for a specific thing to place in a casket, I could very much identify with not caring the price of the item. It showed his love for his grandma very well.
Oh to be remembered like this! You have my heart . . .
That was very touching and poignant. And quite striking in the way it moved from seemingly innocuous to serious. I liked it.
09/09/14
Totally credible dialogue and setting. And then you cranked it up for the close. Great work!
09/10/14
Really liked how you wrapped this one up. The MC who hated God became a pastor officiating at his beloved Gram's funeral. NICE.