The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/14
This multi layered piece speaks volumes...and I truly loved the wrap-up. Well done.

God bless~
08/29/14
Very descriptive and credible within the fantasy setting of a strong moral piece, Well done.
The Lady or the Tiger? Beautiful, well written piece.
Wow. This is, if there is such a thing, a wondrous Christian fable eureka! A parable! Love this . . .
I love your fairy-tale analogy. The moral is clear.
09/02/14
Oh my, you crafted an entire epic tale in few words.
A splendid and overflowing feast that left me satiated.
Great story and analogy.

Once we give in to temptation, it is so much harder to resist but that doesn't mean we must fail.
A beautiful piece of writing with a clear message. One of my favourites.
09/04/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
09/04/14
How did you pack so much story into 750 words? A fast moving masterpiece. Love it! Congratulations on your placing.
09/04/14
Congrats on your placement. Blessings.
09/05/14
Oh, I love fairy tales. This is beautiful. Congratulations, Helen. God bless.