The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing along with a powerful story with a prolific message. Well done.

God bless~
You did such a good job of bringing your MC to life with his inner dialogue. My how we can misconstrue things without proper perspective, huh?

I love the character of your humble, easily confused, criminal, trying to work out his salvation.

Really nice job. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I can only echo the previous comments. This is very very well written!
The conversational tone of your story really brought me into the story. I like how you started with a mystery that ended with a message. Good work.
I like the way you developed your MC's character with the tone of your writing.

Great story!
I loved your use of language and thought in this. It made me smile right to the end.

God bless~
Great story with a message. Your conversational style drew me in from the start. Congratulations on your EC.
Great job...congrat!