The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/14
This is wonderful to read, a feast of words so well woven together. I was on the edge of my seat and pulling words out of your MC. Incredible voice you gave her.

Wow, if this isn't in the top three, I'll be surprised.

Thanks for sharing your talent.
08/28/14
This is so beautiful. I found myself reading more quickly as I neared the end; I was leaning in, willing for Amy to speak, to say something! I really like the way you interpreted the theme, it was very different and worked so well. A great entry, well done. Blessings, Helen
08/28/14
Wow! Wow! Wow! oh Wow!

This gave me goose bumps! This was magnificent, moving, compelling...and pulled me in and kept my attention as if I was in that room!

Truly an epic entry that is powerful in all aspects with such a touching ending, it made me cry!

I LOVE THIS! Thanks.

God bless~
08/29/14
You did an excellent job of pulling us in and making us experience things from Amy's perspective. Your use of language and ability to evoke emotion and longing was exquisite.

Great job!
09/04/14
Pauline,

I simply LOVED this and am so happy for your recognition and EC!

God bless~
09/04/14
Congrats on your EC...I knew it was a winner.
09/07/14
Your entry made we wonder how many comatose are only so in their physicality,still fully functioning beneath the flesh.
The MC's silent cry for the radio to be turned back on was a supurb touch to a brilliant story.