The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. You brought the character to life. I love his attitude and never give up point of view. I could picture the little boy working so hard. This is a great take on the topic too.
Awww...This was a really good story...well done!

God Bless~
I really like this piece. Can sense the love, the respect for the young man's finding his way, his truth, and the patience and encouragement (and pride) of parents.
Well chosen title!

Loved this story and would like to know how it ultimately ended. Very well done!
Delightful and sweet. I enjoyed immensely.
Well written account of the challenges and blessings of parenting.

So patient and encouraging.

Many good lessons from this story.

Great job.

Yes I'd say your son gave you perfect inspiration this week for a splendid story.
Ah, that was a clever take on the topic!

I can identify with the struggle you portrayed, of trying to find one's way.
Enjoyable story and great for the topic. Congratulations on your EC win.
Well deserved!
Hugs! Congratulations!

God bless~