The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 557 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Great, and touching , story. I loved it that they had to get TWO puppies!
08/02/14
Awww...This was so sweet, great job.

I loved this.

God bless~
That was beautiful! Very moving. It felt completely real, and I was surprised to see the "fiction" label on it. A couple mistakes toward the end drew me out of the story a touch, but even so--totally fantastic! Well done! Keep writing.
So cute and sad! Good writing!
This is so beautiful, you draw the strands of a long life of love and commitment together so well. A lovely story. Many congrats.
08/08/14
Congrats Leola! Love puppy stories!

God BLess~
08/08/14
oh wow! I want this to be made into a movie! Super writing! I loved every word. Congrats on your EC, Leola!
08/11/14
Your tender story left me with tears spilling thinking of the precious friends God sent to the MC's family.
My wise husband thinks our dogs may be furry angels in disguise.
Lovely narration!