The Official Writing Challenge
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This is AWESOME! Loved every bit of it. I needed a good laugh tonight. :)
Great story...loved it!

God bless~
This is a funny and fun read. I'm with you. Let's never grow up; at least let's not let our imaginations (or ability pun) ever dry up! Write on!
Oh what a hoot! You had me laughing even though part of me felt sorry for the fly. Death by salt seems like a tortuous way to kill...until you mentioned dying it green so it looked like guts. I had to laugh again. This is super creative and of course you know I'm waving my fingers in the air, shouting Whoo-Hoo! Happy Dance! (And my dog is giving me a weird look, but what does he know, he just jumped up and ate a fly. I wonder if he'd preferred it salted.)
God BLess~
What a delightful dialogue between siblings.
I imagined you and your brother teasingly interacting as the model for this story.
Very enjoyable and realistic.