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07/25/14
How real this feels to the reader. So many young men and women stayed connected through letters, especially in war times. Words on paper became lifelines to many. So glad this ended on a happy note.
07/25/14
Awww. This was a sweet and poignant read. Well done!

God bless~
07/27/14
Aw, I love a happy ending. I liked the style of your entry and the bit of nail biting in the middle when the letters were delayed. A sweet tale of long distance romance in WW1. And possibly a true story for some.
07/27/14
Hi,
I liked this story and the happy ending. It felt real even down to the describing of seasons.
I felt though that exclamation points may have been used a little too often.
Blessings,
Jennifer
07/27/14
The world was a very big place. So much has changed since then but the power of the written word never changes. Loved this piece:)
07/27/14
Great job. I loved the way the letters felt real. And I always want the happy ending, so thank you!
07/30/14
Nicely executed idea. Precious and heartwarming interactions between your two MC's ended well.